Try to be more specific about how your feedback influenced your productions. Talk about specific decisions that you made or changed as a result of what you found e.g. changing font size on print text or transition on video.
It would also be useful to include more reference to specific questions that you asked rather than just evaluating the method. You could also quote from some of the responses that you got.
Try to be more specific about how your feedback influenced your productions. Talk about specific decisions that you made or changed as a result of what you found e.g. changing font size on print text or transition on video.
ReplyDeleteIt would also be useful to include more reference to specific questions that you asked rather than just evaluating the method. You could also quote from some of the responses that you got.