A well-structured and detailed response. It would be worth mentioning your music's genre more explicitly, the resulting target audience (and how your combination of texts was suitable for them) and perhaps comparing your 'package' to that of another similar artist (briefly - or at least you can say things like, "as seen in my research of..." etc).
A well-structured and detailed response. It would be worth mentioning your music's genre more explicitly, the resulting target audience (and how your combination of texts was suitable for them) and perhaps comparing your 'package' to that of another similar artist (briefly - or at least you can say things like, "as seen in my research of..." etc).
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